.....a wordy, visual , narrative... as seen thru your eyes and mine.....
"One ought only to write when one leaves a piece of one's own flesh in the inkpot, each time one dips one's pen." Leo Tolstoy
you come in waves..
part you,
part me,
part fantasy....
they are more peaceful waves now,
they no longer dash me upon the shore..
leaving me breathless and broken..
more the ebb than the flow...
leaving me, just, alone....
at the waters edge....
on the surface,
hard and cold... like smooth, wet sand...
Posted by paisley at 7:15 AM
3 comments:
What a sad and beautiful picture.
W.
A beautiful well written poem. The words "leaving me breathless and broken" are very powerful.
came via the poetry carnival
this is great. the depth of poem and the imagery flows over my ears and into my heart. wonderful work
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