Saturday, May 19, 2007

waters edge

you come in waves..
part you,
part me,
part fantasy....

they are more peaceful waves now,
they no longer dash me upon the shore..
leaving me breathless and broken..
more the ebb than the flow...

leaving me, just, alone....
at the waters edge....
on the surface,
hard and cold... like smooth, wet sand...

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

What a sad and beautiful picture.
W.

Anonymous said...

A beautiful well written poem. The words "leaving me breathless and broken" are very powerful.

rackoy said...

came via the poetry carnival

this is great. the depth of poem and the imagery flows over my ears and into my heart. wonderful work

.....a wordy, visual , narrative... as seen thru your eyes and mine.....